Yes you got me right, I just put my anguish and loss into words so that every other soul who's going through the same have a piece to resonate with and for solace.
Thanks for appreciating my work from the bottom of my heart>>
"But now, it seems to be a game—a series of calculated moves, where vulnerability is seen as weakness and sincerity as naivety."
The hypocrisy of society gets numbing and alienating. Being real is admired but is not the game on the table. Somewhere we got so caught up with running the system that everything became a parament in a machine. The genuine ones descend, as not all places are meant for them.
Perhaps, the person who says “love is dead” faces fewer practical contradictions.
You write beautifully—keep at it. And at least you’re living up to Bukowski’s advice on becoming a great writer. Good luck :)
You have brought your experience to us, for that i thank you.
You have told of times that so many of us have gone through, i do not know how you would have gone through those years, feeling certainty & suddenly uncertainty in your love story.
But i am sure it would have been difficult & beautiful in it's own way.
First love is always difficult to move through from, you have taken the first steps & i am sure you would come out better.
Thank you for the mention & keep writing as you write.
It felt like I was reading your poem but in the form of prose😅
And don’t get me started on those poems. WOWW just Wowww. They are so beautiful, marvellous, brilliant, raw, honest and every other word of praise I can’t think of right now♥️😅
I hope you find your true love soon. Your second true love, because the first is writing. I can totally see you becoming a great poet in the future. Your poems have something extraordinary. They flow like rivers and dance like the streams, making our hearts scream with praise for you.
Just keep writing beautiful pieces like this. And I always hope the best for you♥️♥️
Yes you got me right, I just put my anguish and loss into words so that every other soul who's going through the same have a piece to resonate with and for solace.
Thanks for appreciating my work from the bottom of my heart>>
This is so true, sometimes I feel like I disappear when I’m with people I love and even that feels good. Thank you for writing so vulnerably!
Beautiful, as always!
"But now, it seems to be a game—a series of calculated moves, where vulnerability is seen as weakness and sincerity as naivety."
The hypocrisy of society gets numbing and alienating. Being real is admired but is not the game on the table. Somewhere we got so caught up with running the system that everything became a parament in a machine. The genuine ones descend, as not all places are meant for them.
Perhaps, the person who says “love is dead” faces fewer practical contradictions.
You write beautifully—keep at it. And at least you’re living up to Bukowski’s advice on becoming a great writer. Good luck :)
Thanks Rick!
You've effortlessly interpreted my thoughts what I just wanted to convey.
You have brought your experience to us, for that i thank you.
You have told of times that so many of us have gone through, i do not know how you would have gone through those years, feeling certainty & suddenly uncertainty in your love story.
But i am sure it would have been difficult & beautiful in it's own way.
First love is always difficult to move through from, you have taken the first steps & i am sure you would come out better.
Thank you for the mention & keep writing as you write.
Thank you for the sweet mention Kriti!! Your work deserves to be seen 🥹🤍
Tysm Halima🌷
Wow!!!!!
This was so so so well written!!
It felt like I was reading your poem but in the form of prose😅
And don’t get me started on those poems. WOWW just Wowww. They are so beautiful, marvellous, brilliant, raw, honest and every other word of praise I can’t think of right now♥️😅
I hope you find your true love soon. Your second true love, because the first is writing. I can totally see you becoming a great poet in the future. Your poems have something extraordinary. They flow like rivers and dance like the streams, making our hearts scream with praise for you.
Just keep writing beautiful pieces like this. And I always hope the best for you♥️♥️
Yes always 🥹♥️